2020-08-12 09:47:36
英语写作,要避免写成流水账和一种句式的平面图。英语写作,要注意如下几点:
写作注意事项:
a. 长短句结合
b. 时态保持一致
c. 避免单一句型多次重复使用:如相邻两三个句子都是同一主语和同一主谓结构。
d. 要用多种句式:祈使句、陈述句、疑问句和感叹句。
e. 避免重复使用某个单词,如果要用,用近义词替换。
现在咱们用一篇学生的作文作为样例,看如何修改:
修改过程:
合并第一和第二句话: I usually get up at 7 o’clock and go to school at 7:30. (复合主语和复合谓语)
需要注意的知识点:两个复合谓语用and连接,不需要逗号
第三句话,句型结构重复前面的句子,需要改变句型。
改变句型的方法:
a. 把时间提前: From 8:30 to 11:45, I have lessons.
b. 换主语: My morning lessons start at 8:30 and end at 11:45.
修改后的稿子:
I usually get up at 7 o’clock and go to school at 7:30. From 8:30 to 11:45, I have lessons. I have lunch at 12:00. Then, my afternoon lessons start at 2:30 pm and end at 4:15 pm. I always leave school at 4:30 pm and arrive home at 5:00 pm. From 6:00 pm to 8:00 pm, I do my homework. My bedtime is around 10:00 pm.